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Post by impactofreason3 on Apr 4, 2007 1:01:03 GMT -5
Here is a song I wrote called "Into The Sky" You may comment on what you thought and fight over what you think it means (and I'll tell ya later....it was actually a random writing though)
Break free from the fences And fly away soon Get out before they catch you
Soar into the sky Don't look back I promise I won't cry
Save yourself Just leave me here I'm not afraid And you're not alone
Soar into the sky Don't look back I promise I won't cry
Forget the memories of me Don't even think about it Just fly away, fly away In the sky As you go
Fly away In the sky Don't look back As you leave me behind
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Post by Freddy-May on Apr 4, 2007 1:03:42 GMT -5
WOW. This is very, very nice. All I can say is, very good job. YaY!
Seriously, I don't have any criticism... yet. >.<
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Post by impactofreason3 on Apr 4, 2007 1:05:36 GMT -5
WOW. This is very, very nice. All I can say is, very good job. YaY! Seriously, I don't have any criticism... yet. >.< Yup. Thanks
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♦Pochama♦
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Post by ♦Pochama♦ on Apr 10, 2007 16:52:34 GMT -5
WOW! I loved it! That totally gets me motivated to get writing lyrics again... AWESOME!
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Post by impactofreason3 on Apr 10, 2007 22:09:42 GMT -5
^thank you
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